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Writing Scholarship Essay Tips
2. Selecting an essay topic <= you are here
3. Writing the essay
Step Two - Selecting an Essay Topic
Consider the following questions before proceeding:
Have you selected a topic that
describes something of personal importance in your life, with which you can
use vivid personal experiences as supporting details?
Is your topic a gimmick? That is,
do you plan to write your essay in iambic pentameter or make it funny. You
should be very, very careful if you are planning to do this. We recommend strongly
that you do not do this. Almost always, this is done poorly and
is not appreciated by the admissions committee. Nothing is worse than not
laughing or not being amused at something that was written to be funny or
Will your topic only repeat information
listed elsewhere on your application? If so, pick a new topic. Dont
mention GPAs or standardized test scores in your essay.
Can you offer vivid supporting
paragraphs to your essay topic? If you cannot easily think of supporting
paragraphs with concrete examples, you should probably choose a different
Can you fully answer the question
asked of you? Can you address and elaborate on all points within the specified
word limit, or will you end up writing a poor summary of something that might
be interesting as a report or research paper? If you plan on writing something
technical for college admissions, make sure you truly can back up your interest
in a topic and are not merely throwing around big scientific words. Unless
you convince the reader that you actually have the life experiences to back
up your interest in neurobiology, the reader will assume you are trying to
impress him/her with shallow tactics. Also, be sure you can write to admissions
officers and that you are not writing over their heads.
Can you keep the reader's interest
from the first word. The entire essay must be interesting, considering admissions
officers will probably only spend a few minutes reading each essay.
Is your topic overdone? To ascertain
this, peruse through old essays. CollegeGate's 100 free essays can help you
do this. However, most topics are overdone, and this is not a bad thing.
A unique or convincing answer to a classic topic can pay off big.
Will your topic turnoff a large
number of people? If you write on how everyone should worship your God, how
wrong or right abortion is, or how you think the Republican or Democratic
Party is evil, you will not get into the college of your choice. The only
thing worse than not writing a memorable essay is writing an essay that will
be remembered negatively. Stay away from specific religions, political doctrines,
or controversial opinions. You can still write an essay about Nietzsche's
influence on your life, but express understanding that not all intelligent
people will agree with Nietzsche's claims. Emphasize instead Nietzsche's
influence on your life, and not why you think he was wrong or right
in his claims.
In this vein, if you are presenting
a topic that is controversial, you must acknowledge counter arguments without
Will an admissions officer remember
your topic after a day of reading hundreds of essays? What will the officer
remember about your topic? What will the officer remember about you? What
will your lasting impression be?
After evaluating your essay topics with the above criteria and asking for
the free opinions of your teachers or colleagues, and of your friends, you
should have at least 1-2 interesting essay topics. Consider the following
1. If you are planning on writing an essay on how you survived poverty
in Russia, your mother's suicide, your father's kidnapping, or your immigration
to America from Asia, you should be careful that your main goal is to address
your own personal qualities. Just because something sad or horrible has happened
to you does not mean that you will be a good college or graduate school student.
You don't want to be remembered as the pathetic applicant. You want to be
remembered as the applicant who showed impressive qualities under difficult
circumstances. It is for this reason that essays relating to this topic are
considered among the best. Unless you only use the horrible experience as
a lens with which to magnify your own personal characteristics, you will
not write a good essay. Graduate and professional school applicants should
generally steer clear of this topic altogether unless you can argue that
your experience will make you a better businessman, doctor, lawyer, or scholar.
2. Essays should fit in well with the rest of a candidate's application,
explaining the unexplained and steering clear of that which is already obvious.
For example, if you have a 4.0 GPA and a 1500 SAT, no one doubts your ability
to do the academic work and addressing this topic would be ridiculous. However,
if you have an 850 SAT and a 3.9 GPA or a 1450 SAT and a 2.5 GPA, you would
be wise to incorporate in your essay an explanation for the apparent
contradiction. For example, perhaps you were hospitalized or family concerns
prevented your dedication to academics; you would want to mention this in
your essay. However, do not make your essay one giant excuse. Simply give
a quick, convincing explanation within the framework of your larger essay.
3. "Diversity" is the biggest buzzword of the 1990's. Every college,
professional school, or graduate school wants to increase diversity. For
this reason, so many applicants are tempted to declare what makes them diverse.
However, simply saying you are a black, lesbian female will not impress
admissions officers in the least. While an essay incorporating this information
would probably be your best topic idea, you must finesse the issue by addressing
your own personal qualities and how you overcame stigma, dealt with social
ostracism, etc. If you are a rich student from Beverly Hills whose father
is an engineer and whose mother is a lawyer, but you happen to be a minority,
an essay about how you dealt with adversity would be unwise. You must demonstrate
vividly your personal qualities, interests, motivations, etc. Address
specifically how your diversity will contribute to the realm of campus opinion,
the academic environment, and social life.
4. Don't mention weaknesses unless you absolutely need to explain
them away. Why admit to weakness when you can instead showcase your strengths?
5. Be honest - but not for honesty's sake. Unless you are a truly
excellent writer, your best, most passionate writing will be about events
that actually occurred. While you might be tempted to invent hardship, it
is completely unnecessary. Write an essay about your life that demonstrates
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